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Got a look at the
tattoo on your shoulder
last night and wanted nothing more painfully than to

sink cuspids into muscle tasting sweat dancing smooth implosions over tongue

Kissed your cheek
yesterday, playfully, but my insides were
telling me to move over further so I could

drink fern-colored water from breath gasping quick like your thumbs teasing nipples

Slept curled against your side
this morning, back to chest, forcing
my hips to lie still, wishing it were

slow pulsing into-out-of arching bodies towards pleasure supernovas leaving thighs twined nerves panting

Let your hair curl under my palm
damp from sun, while you brushed your fingers
through mine, branding me with the whorls of your individual print.

those hands could be...

oh god...
: predatory
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Date:July 10th, 2004 01:38 pm (UTC)
- wow - three small letters to describe surprise at every word. This piece is extraordinary, and wouldn't work without doing exactly what you have...wonderful poem
Date:July 10th, 2004 04:21 pm (UTC)


thanks for your reaction, it means a lot :)
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